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Offline Full_Metal

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Poem: Full Metal
« on: July 26, 2009, 09:16:10 AM »
i take absolutely no credit for this, it is not mine, but i thought you may like to read it



Do I like him?
I don’t really know,
I’ve never had a real boyfriend
I think I’m scared
What if he’s like all the others?
What if I get hurt?

How can you ever tell?
My body says one thing…
But the head says something else

What about her?
Dare I wait …
Or go with him?

I’m so confused
But I cant remember a single day when I haven’t been.
« Last Edit: March 24, 2016, 08:29:56 AM by 1thwonder »
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Re: my friends poem about me mainly
« Reply #1 on: July 26, 2009, 07:10:53 PM »
Decent I guess, but kinda emoish.
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Re: my friends poem about me mainly
« Reply #2 on: July 26, 2009, 08:10:03 PM »
yeah, she is kinda emoish, she use to be really emo a fair while ago
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Re: my friends poem about me mainly
« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2009, 07:25:53 PM »
cool,but i already see better poems.
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Re: my friends poem about me mainly
« Reply #4 on: July 27, 2009, 09:51:24 PM »
yes, i have seen alot of very good poems before, but if i see something i like, i may post it up on the forums if i see fit for you guys to see it, i do it to give my friends some more feedback on what people think of it

and its still not bad for a amateur
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Re: my friends poem about me mainly
« Reply #5 on: July 27, 2009, 10:45:37 PM »
It doesn't really seem like a poem....

More just a collection of thoughts.
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Re: my friends poem about me mainly
« Reply #6 on: July 28, 2009, 05:59:56 AM »
yeah, that is a good point demi
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